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Short Poem: The Brakes

Fields upon fiends is all I see.
Waiting for something to change .
Grass upon grass won’t leave my sight.
Until I press the brakes.

It’s time to take to the sky.
And leave behind behind the fields.
To a concrete jungle, an endless ocean or mountains that reach the clouds.

Buildings upon buildings.
Mountains upon mountains.
Sea upon sea won’t leave my sight.
Until I’m not waiting any longer.
And I don’t press the brakes.

My money and my work reaches out to press the brakes for me.
I can’t stop them.
Fields upon fields is all I see.
I’m waiting again.
For something to change.



Just like I started my short stories, I always wanted to start writing poems online. Originally I was thinking of creating another WordPress website for them but eventually I decided to add them on to this website, hope you enjoy!

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12 responses to “Short Poem: The Brakes”

  1. javaidbanday Avatar
    javaidbanday

    Which place is this in your blog post? You write a good thing .

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      travelcd

      Thank you ♥️ the picture is from the Canary Islands. In my poem the fields upon fields comment is about England. I live in England, in a small town, my area is very flat and fields surround us, while it’s pretty but if that’s all you see, it can get very boring and makes me want to explore other places more! 😊

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  2. Johnbritto Kurusumuthu Avatar
    Johnbritto Kurusumuthu

    I appreciate your poetic expression and the way you’ve captured the sense of longing for change and exploration. Writing poems online is a wonderful way to share your creativity with others. Keep sharing your work; it’s a beautiful form of self-expression!👍

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      travelcd

      Thank you so much! What a heartwarming and detailed comment! ❤️ That means so much to me! Thank you 🥰😘

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        Johnbritto Kurusumuthu

        👍🎁

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  3. sagensalt Avatar
    sagensalt

    I liked this very much, well chica

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      travelcd

      Thank you 😊

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  4. sagensalt Avatar
    sagensalt

    well done Chica

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      travelcd

      Thank you so much 😊

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  5. Wholeness Chronicles Journey Avatar
    Wholeness Chronicles Journey

    Thanks for sharing a well written and beautiful poem. I will be catching up on the others .Thanks for supporting.

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    1. travelcd Avatar
      travelcd

      Thank you! I am excited to write more 😊

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      1. Wholeness Chronicles Journey Avatar
        Wholeness Chronicles Journey

        For sure I love your work. Thanks for responding.

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